You paper is very good so far. It has a lot of good quotes and detail. It is a little short but that can be fixed by add more explanation to your quotes. Also you may need a few more sources and a work's cited. It think that your paper flows very fluently through all the documents. There are a flew spelling mistakes but all together it is good. Keep working on it but you are getting there.
You paper is very good so far. It has a lot of good quotes and detail. It is a little short but that can be fixed by add more explanation to your quotes. Also you may need a few more sources and a work's cited. It think that your paper flows very fluently through all the documents. There are a flew spelling mistakes but all together it is good. Keep working on it but you are getting there.
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