Tuesday, 5 April 2011

Term Paper Second Rough Draft

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1UZRlMJrP_T_3MDS0cyIFipGyJi6sUZZIyqh-g7P7FBM/edit?authkey=COLW6p4I&hl=en#

1 comment:

  1. You paper is very good so far. It has a lot of good quotes and detail. It is a little short but that can be fixed by add more explanation to your quotes. Also you may need a few more sources and a work's cited. It think that your paper flows very fluently through all the documents. There are a flew spelling mistakes but all together it is good. Keep working on it but you are getting there.

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